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PostSubject: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:02 pm

THE CASK OF AMONTILLADO
By Edgar Allen Poe
Rewritten And Revised By Vic Landau



The small glass cup hit the table, his hand clenched tightly around it. Eyes red and warm from continuous drinking, Fortunato stepped back from the bar table. His vision blurred as he tripped over another man’s foot who sat at the bar. He stepped outside resting on the wooden walls of the tavern. Eyes closed, feeling the air he hiccuped a few times. He slumped over, falling sleep. “Fortunato.” He looked up drunkily at the blurred figure approaching him, he lifted his head to meet the eyes of Montresor. Montresor clasped Fortunato by the shoulders and looked deeply at him. “The Amontillado” he said. Fortunato stopped, he stared blankly at Montresor’s chest.
“The Amontillado?”
“Yes.”
“The Amontillado, where?”
“In the catacombs of my palace.” Came the short reply from Montresor’s dry lips, he licked them. Eyes staring deep and hard at Fortunato who could notice, he was incredibly drunk. He stumbled hard into the night, arm resting on Montresor’s shoulder. A tight grip on his collar, the thought of the Amontillado kept him going. They reached Montresor’s palace, only the whistling of the night and the singing of the wind in the trees could be heard, because it was deserted there. “Maybe this is not a good idea, it is late.” Said Montresor, he seemed to have worry in his eyes. “Nay Montresor, we search your catacombs!” Gung Ho, Fortunato marched forward, grabbing a torch and entering the dark underground. Fortunato walked forward, he felt less drunk and rested. He followed through the dark maze holding out his fire to show the path, but he still could only see a few feet ahead. Montresor pitched in, “maybe I should lead?” “good idea!” Fortunato stepped to the side to let Montresor pass. They kept marching through the the crumbly hallways lit by fire. They’re breath in the air and the orange on their faces, illuminating the dark corridors. Finally they reached a dead end. Fortunato being tired, slumped over. “Where?” he asked, turning towards Montresor, who had a chilling smirk on his face. “Here!” Montresor grabbed Fortunato’s head and slammed it against the stone. He cried out in pain and blanked for a few seconds. He came to the room darker then before. His torch was smothered on the ground. He stepped forward toward Montresor who stood, arms crossed a smile of delight on his face. Fortunato stopped and looked at his wrists, he was chained to the wall. “Montresor…” Montresor only put his finger to his lips, then began to lay stone and cement on the ground in front of Fortunato. Fortunato screeched and wrenched his arms shaking screaming, but no prevail, he was still chained. Montresor was already half way done, Fortunato his head scambled red, his cheeks and his legs trembled violently. “A-a-a-a marvelous joke M-montresor!” he yelled laughing his head off. His legs gave way and he slumped down, still laughing wildly. Montresor chimed in too, with chuckling of his own, as he placed thesecond to last row up. Fortunato grew cold as he stared at the last row of stones piled on. He knew the greusome death he awaited so he had no choice. He heard Montresor calling him as he fell to everlasting slumber. Blood ran from his lips to the ground, as his teeth clenched into his toungue. His eyes rolled back and he died. The darkness enveloped the caverns, as Montresor happy as could be, climbed his way out of the catacombs. Stretching in the cold night air, he dropped his torch which incidentily landed on his bales of hay, he wished to bring to the stables the next day. They lit aflame! He screeched as the fire enveloped him and his memories. No one knows about the fate of Montresor and Fortunato. No one.



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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Sun Nov 04, 2007 11:50 am

study My class just read that Shocked last week
Friday we took a test on it


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but yes it was alil diffrent >.>
cause you edited it

but still
rather werid
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Tue Nov 13, 2007 8:58 am

Its good. i liked how you made montressor pay also in the end. i have to admit i didnt see the end coming like that
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Sat Nov 17, 2007 7:08 pm

yea

for school but i liked it a bit

i got an a- tho

cus it wasnt exactly like the story
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Mon Nov 26, 2007 9:51 pm

stupid poser teacher silent
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Thu Dec 13, 2007 8:52 am

lol, i knoooow
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Mon Dec 17, 2007 8:08 pm

poser teachers suz yay cheers
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Tue Dec 18, 2007 3:58 am

looks good but to long for me geek lol im to lazy so if a like 20 line max. one was madei would read Wink

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Tue Dec 18, 2007 6:53 am

you lazy bastard

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Tue Dec 18, 2007 7:57 am

oh yeah

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Thu Dec 20, 2007 9:38 pm

i know isn't he vic? Suspect
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:20 am

what makes you think im a he????? i might just be a gir......no wait i didnt mean that..................

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Sat Dec 22, 2007 5:43 pm

prin..u wanna tell us something?

and yeah we know about ur sex change karl

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Sun Dec 23, 2007 11:52 am

Shocked what sex change?!?!?!.................................

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Mon Dec 24, 2007 11:57 am

idk what am i suspose to tell you? Exclamation Question
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Wed Dec 26, 2007 6:02 am

tell us that your an alien

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Wed Dec 26, 2007 3:38 pm

karl explain the vagina 1st

prin u said "i know he isnt" so i was just saying...

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:30 pm

fuk the waaa?!?!?!?

its the sexual rep[roductive organ on a women lol thats a biolocical definiftion

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:55 pm

nevermind Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Thu Dec 27, 2007 12:56 pm

Sleep

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Mon Dec 31, 2007 1:40 pm

i confused :/
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Mon Dec 31, 2007 3:04 pm

yay im not alone anymore Smile now theres someone else confuzzeled and not just me Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Tue Jan 01, 2008 7:23 am

lmao i lost my train of thought and forgot what this thread was about. *go to 1st page* xD and then i remembered that 20 lines was better than reading yours. ill put my macbeth paper up. my teacher said it was good enough to be a fresh/soph lvl in college
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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Wed Jan 02, 2008 5:03 pm

cat cat

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PostSubject: Re: A Short Story I Wrote For My Homework That I Liked   Wed Jan 02, 2008 5:15 pm

I love you all

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